公开课-如何写建议信.ppt
how to write a letter of advice,writing,Dear Mr.Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some advice.What we need most are popular science books.They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books.They not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Yue,建议信,Ending express your hope,Beginning state your purpose,Body give advice&reasons,1.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on2.I am writing to express my views concerning3.Knowing that,Id like to give some suggestions.,A.state your purpose,sentence patterns,B.give your advice,1.Its helpful/important to2.It would be a good idea to3.I would like to suggest that,C.express your hope,1.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.2.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.3.Im sure if you take my advice,you will,表达愿望：5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。,The use of sentence patterns,表明意图：1.你给Jane 回信就如何减肥提建议。,提出建议：2、健康饮食3、多锻炼4、喝足够多的水,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,Id like to give some suggestions.,It is important to have a healthy diet.,It is helpful to do more exercise.,It would be a good idea to drink enough water.,I am sure if you take my advice,you will become slimmer and stay healthy.,假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右。1、健康饮食 2、多锻炼 3、喝足够多的水,It is helpful to do more exercise.,It would be a good idea to drink enough water.,It is important to have a healthy diet.,Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,Id like to give some suggestions.,First,it is important to have a healthy diet.,In addition,it would be a good idea to drink enough water.,Besides,it is helpful to do more exercise.,I am sure if you take my advice,you will become slimmer and stay healthy.,In order to lose weight,you can eat more vegetables and fruits.,The more exercise you take,the more fat you will burn off,and you will be thinner.,Because water can support our body and activities,and help us lose weight.,Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,Id like to give some suggestions.First,it is important to have a healthy diet.In order to lose weight,you can eat more vegetables and fruits.Besides,it also helps if you take more exercise.The more exercise you take,the more fat you will burn off,and you will be thinner.In addition,it should be a good idea to drink enough water,because water can support our body and activities,and help us lose weight.Im sure if you take my advice,you will become slimmer and stay healthy.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。,引出话题，表明写作意图,1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。,提出建议：,总结，表达愿望,连接词,(多个建议+多个理由),Outline,评分标准,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua,Homework,1.memorize the sentence patterns2.polish your writing,常见连接词罗列观点,Firstly,First of all,Above all,To begin with,In the first place,For one thing,Secondly,Besides,Moreover,In addition,Whats more,Furthermore,Worse still,To make matters worse,For another thing,Finally,At last,In the end,Last but not least,
