基础写作-人物介绍.ppt

,基础写作：人物简介专题,人物简介,1).属于记叙文体裁2).基本类型：记人，叙事，写景3).常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友，老师，父母，名人等等4).记叙方法：顺叙，倒叙，插叙5).注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人，不拖泥带水；注意5W1H；人称时态。6).常见段落结构：主题句发展句结论句,一、人物简介的写作步骤：1Birthday and birth place2Family background3Education background4Big events in his or her life(in order of time)5Evaluation,二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：1.Birthday and birth place:was/were born in on她与1867年12月7日出生与波兰。eg.She was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.,2.Family backgroundwas/were born in/into a poor/rich familyhis/her family was so poor thathis/her father was very strict with himthe son of a poor familywhen he was a small boy/youngas a child/as a boy of 15during his/her childhoodspend his childhood inlive a happy/hard life,亚伯拉罕.林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子，与1809年2月12日出生与Kentucky。eg.Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.查理.狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育。Born of a poor clerks family,Charles Dickens had little schooling.,3.Education background,be admitted to collegegraduate fromdepartment of universitywhen at college,he majored inreceive a doctors degreego abroad for further studies,4.Big events in ones life,be interested in/be fond ofwork hard atserve asdevote his lifetime/himself toconcentrate himself todo research about/intomake up ones mind to do sth.do sth with great determination and perseverancebe strict in sth.,have a way of doing sthtry ones best to do sth.encourage sb to dofight for,give up ones life for sb/sthwin a prize/the first prize in competitionreceive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize forbe good at do well inbe crazy about enjoy,make rapid progress in set a new world record of equal the world recordwin(won)a gold/silver/bronze medalbe selected to/become a member ofstudy hard train hardgo through hardshipovercome many difficultieshave a gift/talent for language,etc,one of the best/most important set a good example fora model teacher/workerbe respected by everyonespeak/think highly ofbe honored as(an excellent athlete)His hard work brought him great success.He is the pride of China.His heroic story spread all over the city.,5.Evaluation,make great contributions toConsistency/Perseverance is the key to success.be famous/known as be regarded asbecome a world champion at Championships（锦标赛）remember sb foreverA new chapter of history has been turnedLei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.an inspiring leader,5.Evaluation,6.描写人物外貌和性格特征,good-looking funny-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired warm-hearted kind-hearted absent-minded bad-tempered near-sighted far-sighted a strong will tall short pretty naughty smart wise bright diligent lazy healthy humorous charming（迷人的）attractive talkative confidence independent patience,请根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇介绍中国第一位航天英雄杨利伟的短文。,【实例剖析：】,【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点：文体：记叙文 人称:根据内容可确定本文人称为第 人称,要点：时态：,【实例剖析：】,短语及句型：be born in,Join the Chinese Air Force be sent into space Shenzhou V spacecraft Land safely Chinas national flag United Nations flag,报纸32期基础写作,Yangliwei,born in Liaoning Province in 1965,became a pilot in the Chinese Air Force in 1987.After 5 years of training,he was sent into space at 9 am on October 15th in 2003 by Chinas Shenzhou V spacecraft,which orbited the earth 14 times.After about 21 hours in space,he landed safely the next day.In space Yang recorded everything he saw.He showed Chinese national flag and the United Nations flag to the people watching on TV at home.,32 期报纸读写任务,This passage mainly tells us the important role parents plays in their childrens education.Parents should always encourage their children and help them learn something from failure.,In my opinion,parents can play a very important role not only in children s life but also in their education.If the parents are strict,their children will surely take their study more seriously.If a child is often encouraged by his parents,he will certainly be more confident.Take myself as an example,when I was in Junior 1,I did very badly in an English exam and I felt very sad.I thought I wasnt able to learn English well.After my mother learnt about it,she told me to be patient.She said she believed I could do better if I worked harder and was more careful the next time.Her comfort and encouragement was of great help to me and now I do much better at English.,Sample writings,【基础写作实例剖析：】,你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文（只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容），介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。,【实例剖析：】,【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点：文体：记叙文 人称:根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称,要点：李华的出生年月及地点；学历；所学主要课程；特长；获奖情况；业余爱好。,【实例剖析：】,短语及句型：be born in,after that,be good at/do well in,graduate,the main subjects,win first prize,enjoy doing,【One possible version:】,My name is Li Hua.I was born in Dalian,Liaoning Province in February 1977.I started school in 1984 when I was seven and I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990,after that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer,in which English and computer are my favourite,furthermore,last year I won first prize in the school computer competition.When I am free,I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps,and my favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.,范例：请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。,要点分析：,名人介绍，采用第三人称将提供的信息整合以一般过去时态为主。,One possible version:In May 1923,Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in Hong Kong.At the age of ten,his father died.After 1955,he was engaged in architecture,shipping,petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad.Since the beginning of the reform and open policy,he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education,culture,sports,and public welfare in Mainland.He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country,which makes him a Moving China hero.,2006年高考英语书面表达试题北京卷,国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。,One possible version:,Im Wang Shan,a girl of sixteen,presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle.I like music,especially classical music and Im also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life and thanks to my hobbies,Ive made many friends.In fact,I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them because I believe we all need help from each other,I appreciate friends”help,and I am wiling to help anyone in need.I love life;I love Mother Nature,also I love peace,on the contrary,I hate any form of violence.I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp since there would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures.,假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历2.个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况3.承诺：提供最佳服务,2006年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题全国卷（III）,Dear Sir/Madam.My name is Li Hua,I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely.I believe I can do a good job for the Games:first,I like sports and I know the place very well,second,I get along with others easily,which is especially useful for a volunteer,third,Im ready to give help whenever it is needed.My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.Please consider my request,and Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua,2006年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题湖南卷,请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：My Teacher Mr MooreTheres a teacher Mr.Moore.Who is lovely and thirty-four.Always encouraging us to try.He leads us to a world of“why”.We all admire him more and more.注意：1.不得照抄短诗原文。2.必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。3.必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。4.短文不能写成诗歌形式。5.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。,One possible version：,Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impresses me most,though he is 34,he looks very young for his age,and hes one of the most popular teachers in our school.Compared with other teachers,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching,he tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should not only know“what”,but also understand“why”,so,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.Besides,with his help,weve learned how to analyze and settle problem,what a wonderful world of“why”he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.,爱因斯坦于1879年三月十四日生于德国。他小时候喜欢问很多问题。他喜欢数学和科学，但是他比较害羞，不太喜欢学校。17岁到瑞士学习。为了赚足够的钱，他当过教师，后来在政府部门工作。1905年他获得博士学位。19051915年，他开始研究工作，这些研究导致了他在物理方面的许多新发现。1918年，他已经世界闻名。1921年，他获得诺贝尔物理奖，并被邀请到许多国家作演讲。爱因斯坦是20世纪最伟大的科学家。他于1955年四月十八日逝世，终年76岁。,Sample writing:Einstein was born in Germany on March 14th,1879.When he was a young boy,he used to ask a lot of questions.His favourite subjects were maths and science,but he was a shy person and did not enjoy school very much,when he was 17,he went to Switzerland to study,in order to earn enough money to continue his studies,Einstein worked first as a teacher and then worked in a government office,in 1905 he received a doctors degree.From 1905-1915,he began his research and studies,which led to his discoveries in physics,and by the time of 1981,Einstein had been known across the world.He was given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921 and was invited to many countries to give lectures.Einstein was the 20th centurys greatest scientist,he died on April 18th,1955,at the age of 76.,【人物介绍】：刘翔,2004年8月28日是所有中国人难忘的日子，这天刘翔获得第28届奥运会110米栏冠军。请你给英语周报写一篇介绍刘翔的短文。内容要点如下：时间：2004年8月28日第28届奥运会成绩：110米栏冠军，击败欧、美、非名将；第一个冲过终点线，12秒91，平奥运会纪录背景：1983年7月13日出生于上海一个工人家庭成长历程：儿时被父母送入少体校，被孙海平教练发现品质：孝敬父母，每次回家带礼物；对邻居友善意义及未来打算：被称为民族英雄，为中国人和亚洲人争了光；今后更加努力，取得更大成就,