英语人物传记的写作.ppt
人物传记的写作,文章分三部，写作四步走,文章结构：总分总,写作步骤 第一步:审题目 第二步：审要点 第三步：写作文 第四步：查遗漏,（引入部分，正文部分，结尾部分）,写作原则,议论文,总：提出问题，表明观点分：分析问题，论证观点总：总结全文，提出希望,记叙文,总：引入话题，点明主题分：记叙事情的经过（时间）总：谈自己的感悟，体会,各种体裁的文章结构：,说明文,总：引入话题，点明主题分：按一定顺序说明事物或事理总：总结全文，表祝愿或提建议,应用文,总：引入话题，点明主题分：正文部分（要点）总：总结全文，表祝愿或希望,各种体裁的文章结构：,写作步骤,步骤一 审题目,步骤二 审要点,步骤三 写作文,步骤四 查遗漏,列要点，写提纲（列动词短语）,用巧关联词，突出主题句,默读文章，查时态，主谓一致，单复数，大小写和格式,读材料，定体裁格式，人称和时态,人物传记的写作模式：总：总体介绍人物（姓名，身份，地位，主要成就）成长经历，教育情况，兴趣爱好，性格品质，工作经历，感人事迹，突出成绩，功过是非 总：总结评价人物：影响，启示,具体介绍人物：,分：,第一段：Dian Fossey is now regarded as one of the heroes of the 20th century.He love for the mountain gorillas in Africa taught people about dangers these animals are facing.Dian was an outgoing and kind person,and able to gain valuable data about their lives by becoming a comanion to them,教材P57（写作范文）,第二段：Dian Fossey was born in California in 1932.He graduated from university in 1954 and worked.第三段：Dian Fossey is still alive in our hearts to this day.Thanks to her research,we now know more about mountain gorillas.Without her work,there would be very few mountain gorillas left today.,第一段：通过概括性的语言来提示人物的特征。,常用定语从句来写：1.Einstein,who discovered the“Relativity Theory”,is well known in the world.2.Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers(that)the world has ever known.3.ShakesPeare,who was a son from a poor family,a man of little education,write plays and poems that are read all over the world.4.Tomas Edison,born in America,was a great scientist and inventor.,第二段：具体介绍人物（主题句）按时间顺序介绍人物一生 用议论性的语言刻画人物,第三段：总体评价：sb.Still live in ones heart sb.Set a good example for sb be regarded by everyone People sing high praise for sb People think highly of sb sb.Be regarded as remember sb for ever let us realize that.have a great effect on sb sb.teach us that.,按时间顺序介绍人物一生的范文：（见学海导航上的写作范文：姚明）,Yao Ming,who is 2.26meters tall and 134kg in weight,is a great basketball player in China or even in the world.Born in Shanghai on the 12th of September,1980.He joined the Shanghai Basketball Club in 1997 and became a member of China national team in 1998.Two years later he was selected as member of Asian All-Star basketball team.In 2002,Shanghai won the Campion of CBA and he was among the top players in the team.In the same year he want to the US and became Number One Overall in the NBA draft,which helped him join Houston Rockets.Now,as one of the stars in the NBA,Yao Ming is working hard to live his dream and show to the world that Chinese basketball players love this game too!.Fans are proud of him.,第二节 写作(满分25分)（2008湖南）请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：1、对该人物的简单介绍;2、喜欢该人物的理由;3、从该人物身上得到的启示。,用议论性的语言刻画人物的范文：,（2008年湖南高考满分作文）Helen Keller is considered as the most famous disabled woman in the world due to her strength and perseverance.She was born a beautiful and intelligent girl but when she was 19 months old,a terrible disaster happened to her and led to her deafness and blindness forever.But she tried her best to learn speaking and finally she realized her dream to be an excellent speaker.From where I stand,life is very unfair to her but she never gives up to the difficulties she meets.She never bends her head but always hold it high.That is why I admire her so much.Helen teaches me that we should never give up and never complain.So we should learn not to cry no matter what hurt and sorrow we face in our life.,写作训练：,写一篇关爱因斯坦的人物传记,Thomas Edison,as we all know the king of inventing,had more than ten thousands inventions of his life,many of which have enormous influence on our daily life,such as lights and so on.To me,hes the most intelligent and creative man in the world.He is famous for his working hard.An incident which we all know is that when busy in his experiment on a train,he caused a terrible accident and the captain knocked him,causing him to become deaf.He was devoted to science too much.He always said that“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”From him,I have known that if we want to succeed,we shouldnt always depend on our intelligence or talent.Working hard is also very necessary and this is what we most need now.,Thomas Edison,born in America,was a great scientist and inventor.He was once considered to be a boy who was not worth educating.In fact,he was a man full of imagination.I admire Edison a lot owing to his great contributions to the world.He had more than 1000 inventions.In his whole life,he was always eager to know how things worked,which helped him to realize his dream.He was also so diligent that he worked day and night.And this explained why he had so many great inventions.As we all know,his famous saying is“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”Probably I cannot be an Edison myself,but I can be a hardworking teamer.From him,I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born,but what you are doing and how you do in your life.,
