雅思写作课件xyhlesson1简介.ppt

庸头尚伺汁蝉右策雏哇藩汝辣卷烁赐迁条龋钧掀殃醉奸努猖仇蛛墅阉凋算雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,联系方式,微信：113532910邮箱：电话：15001829196,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,1,柏茧邪拨顷殃侯性易恢帆跨调馆扶续汰闻埔置病拷氨硼痘侵黔啮吩属杖亦雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,2,教学内容,雅思写作的题型类别大作文命题规律答题纸的使用中国考生写作分数偏低的六大原因雅思写作的评分标准雅思写作四大步骤真题解析,瞩超踩捉撒牟泰旺颗闽挤街锐贰舀凛典将橙湘缓锗闪藩秀挠争惧菩拇哈掠雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,题型类别,Task 1（20分钟，字数不少于150字，占总分40）学术类：图表作文（饼、线、柱、表格、地图、流程）移民类：书信（投诉、建议、感谢、请求、道歉、其它）Task 2（40分钟，字数不少于250字，占总分60）议论文或报告类文章 学术类与移民类考查内容相同,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,3,埋薄诬饮辱嗓秽蘸施腐泅坛举曝灾慕星戈疾奖矣瞻伎馏贫怒辖终碉莎澈堡雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,Task 2 按照提问方式分类,To what extent do you agree or disagree?Discuss both views and give your own opinionsDo you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?Problems+Reasons+Recommendation(报告类）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,4,箍隔掳滞危激滓樱多搬澳男凛赏疟池敏札从狼酣胯镑亲舟啄孤膀袖令男兆雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,Task 2 按照考试话题分类,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,5,珍弄甚攒痕历扮难钵镊丰江谣杜匙予惦屑课枝寺帝乍咬各问注扛厩棺陀赔雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,答题纸的使用,字数符合要求书写清晰规范 Block style(齐头式）：每段开头顶格写，段落之间空一行 indented style（缩入式）：每段开头后退34个字母距离，段落之间不空行建议使用齐头式，看起来更加清晰易读，且空行显得字数多。,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,6,瓦写盏地刺革其冯藩繁惺犀乐渣耗桨惺雍哼叠习揭性溯干扣韭一俞厦话芥雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,中国考生写作分数偏低的六大原因,轻视小作文过于依赖作文模板未写完或偏题思路窄，论证不够充分语法错误和拼写错误太多词汇匮乏或者堆砌大词、生词,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,7,郸艾痒叛植哭锤简液雾走刑期孔议粟沿犁抛屑芋时值盾诀茫酪稳赫频批刹雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,雅思作文评分标准,Task Achievement/Response(TA/TR)任务完成程度和任务反应 认真审题，不跑题、不偏题、不回答一半问题Coherence and Cohesion(CC)连贯与衔接 合理使用连接词，主体段每段只有一个中心句Lexical Resources(LR)词汇量 用词丰富、准确，多使用词组搭配Grammatical Range and Accuracy(GRA)语法准确性 句子结构多变，简单句与复杂句相结合,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,8,瞄岩易郊镣元臂昧凌跟秽附旋名辟矽刮顺枯想谴迄冗扣渤祥外皂埔舔衬吼雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,雅思写作四大步骤,审题列提纲写正文检查,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,9,厅艺占朱灼晶澈摊球宇瑶赣企沈睁檀斟观蓄碎过暇金碳姓旱蒙颁慰抓湿咬雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,剑桥雅思真题解析,Some people believed that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity,improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.（Cambridge English IElTS 9Test 2Task2),Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,10,贪疵报介冬丘隔稿独蹦上萄萄淹演喘翠前土规感泵寻聂垂永蚕炼临室贵找雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,1.审题（2分钟）,仔细读题，划出关键字；缩小话题范围，明确题型。话题：教育类（做义工是否应成为高中生的必修课）题型：辩论类，同意与否型，并解释原因 题型决定写法字数：不少于250 words（260290words左右）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,11,疤拖互钻辰董侣嗽胞局伍槽幻态虽睦蒲侥立千害硅浇唯垣藕拿畏楷给津得雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,2.列提纲（4分钟）“一边倒”,Introduction(话题背景自己的观点agree)Main body(用3个分论点支持上述观点agree）增强社会责任感（enhance social responsibility)提高交际能力（boost interpersonal skills)提高就业适应度(improve employability)Conclusion（总结上文重申自己的观点agree）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,12,项迄敖待炯笺啪稽擒缸范谐瞳准修推泽中惋糙滓佣拨抬逊结收氛澳扶检朵雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,2.列提纲（4分钟）“一边倒”,Introduction(话题背景自己的观点disagree)Main body(用3个分论点支持上述观点disagree）加重学生压力(pose too much pressure on students)存在安全隐患(have safety risks)影响学习成绩(lower academic performance)Conclusion（总结上文重申自己的观点disagree）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,13,碰限娟硅曝擒截滇盔弥讥吐似寐砂疾勘睡害胎白掸衷谷貉哪稼肯渡蛀惑雌雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,2.列提纲（4分钟）“折中式”,Introduction(话题背景自己的观点)Main body 论述自己更倾向的那一方的第1个理由 论述自己更倾向的那一方的第2个理由 让步段，论述自己不太倾向的一方Conclusion（总结上文重申自己的观点）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,14,黄函渣览干奇赃刊定船束议媳纂寸维洛现户幕幢遏鞭菩察系晓土盼垮子固雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,3.写正文,正文分5段（开头一段，主题三段，结尾一段）每段用时57分钟，文章控制在3032分钟内写完,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,15,耸怀禹要祁拔宵同任霞衷酵兹膘碎挥这岗磕确锗生指浦胃迪哮铆稠肥夕离雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,4.检查（2分钟）,不可省略不宜做大的修改，把笔误修正即可 单词拼写错误 语法结构错误：动词时态、主谓一致、冠词、介词等,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,16,盼浓维投以炯悠面宜笔伸微辅闹繁留吼料涛休孽啥谴光妓评包靛鸵俞缺贬雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,范文解析开头段,In some countries,it is common for seniors in high school to participate inunpaid community service.I suggest that the government should promote this asa social norm for all students in order to enhance social responsibility,boostinterpersonal skills,and improve employability.,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,17,赐哎帧迸善甄兑窿杨哄全壹蒜尾痊笨饮传凡探敛粟逼瞥臭殃跃猖儒竞桂涎雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,范文解析主体段1,Firstly,unpaid community service can effectively enhance students socialresponsibility.1）Under normal circumstances,students seldom have thisopportunity since they spend most of their time in school.2）However,community service would allow them to do good deeds and interact withvarious underprivileged groups,including the homeless,the poor,theelderly,and those affected by tragedy.Students can offer assistance bysimply communicating with the less fortunate to drive away loneliness,orsimply to help with some household chores.By making unpaid communit service mandatory,students will help others in need and they will develop asense of empathy,which in turn will mold them into better citizens.,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,18,沮哟揽修锄既粮航嫡充还烙迎乃阉藏辣谷穆祥渤它稗屏楼滇挺公嘎己新休雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,范文解析主体段2,Secondly,unpaid community service can boost students interpersonalskills.1）Indeed,students will encounter people with diverse personalitiesand they will be able to build relationships with people with differentbackgrounds.2）The students in these programs will learn how to worktogether with their peers for the greater good.,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,19,愉案梆详慰嫂巧亩瓢祖寄蚜债府币帚兢辰删桔郝匀蜡抨雪剔兢夹舆简赊头雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,范文解析主体段3,Finally,unpaid community service can improve students employability 1）because most employers find that compassion for others is admirable.2）Experience in community service also demonstrates that a prospective employee can manage time efficiently,prioritize a range of duties,and deliver a clear presentation.It is this charitable work that teaches them these basic skills and gives them potential for great performance in the workplace.,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,20,绝逃降歉忻狞氯贞热践薪嚼套例资字柔参笼邻乃癣牧蔡驮捍届困悄谚县郝雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,结尾段,In conclusion,the experience that a student acquires from unpaid community service will benefit them greatly;they will improve their community,gain important life skills,and become better people in society.Therefore,I believe these programmes should be a compulsory part for a high school education.(304 words),Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,21,亏鹃臼桔邹烂每忻柠菏搁喉糊应多续吠韶缀臣篙罐喀呛铺癸筋第试哪苹戮雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,范文小结,一篇高分雅思大作文包括：鲜明的文章主题（“一边倒”或“折中式”）清晰的写作结构（5段式）恰当的衔接词汇闪光的语言亮点（词汇&句型）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,22,蚁丁说慷尹怪炮链磊免笼让迹丈箱网拂萧幼橇场置亲拨醇佐翔郁屿诉基怜雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,课后作业,熟练掌握雅思写作红皮书中第1114页的常用的逻辑关系连接词做到会写、会读、会用,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,23,菇寇言柬碑壬胺湘煮枷碗等滨专增箔祈椿飞怪庄暂邓肄冰糖生浪饵区品原雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,24,惩掖聪乓舒呢酉贺绷阐忿内类刀鸭版归七寝庞勘昔另七獭哟符丈指鲜究寺雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介雅思写作课件xyh-lesson 1_简介,