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为什么有相当一部分同学一见作文题就咬笔杆、感到无话可写？问题主要出在要求不当上。学习总有一个过程，由易入难，由简入繁。习作亦是如此。学习写作，我们最先应了解“我可以写些什么”，然后是“我可以怎样去写”，而不是“怎样能写出一篇好文章”。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,学习写作，从学习范文开始。因为范文可以直观地告诉我们如何运用语言文字来反映客观事物，表现内心感受。从中，我们也可以领悟到许多实用的写作方法，丰富自己的语言，为我们今后的构思提供材料，从而打下比较扎实的写作基础。,习作起步阶段应遵循“循序渐进”的原则。一开始可以放低些要求，重点放在段落的练习。上手以后，再逐步丰富文章的内容及表达的方法，提高习作水平。,2.立足模仿，鼓励创新“模仿是创造的第一步，又是学习的最初形式。”（茅盾语）因此，在习作练习中，以范文引路，与阅读紧密结合，从仿写起步学习作文，无疑是提高作文能力的一条捷径，是从阅读到独立写作过程中起桥梁作用的一种有效的训练手段。,（1）立足模仿，知道“我可以这样写”。范文是仿写的样板，它可以直观地告诉你如何运用语言文字来反映客观事物，表达内心的感受。从中，可以领悟到许多实用的写作方法和技巧，丰富自己的语言，为今后的构思提供材料和模式。借助范文指导仿写，可以提供丰富的写作题材，降低写作难度，从而激发写作的兴趣，提高写作能力。,仿写可以从多角度入手，既可以是对整篇文章的全面仿写，即对范文的立意、情节、结构等方面进行全面模仿，也可以对范文的局部仿写，即对文章的某种写作技巧、表达方式、描写方法等某个方面进行模仿。在习作练习中，可以先学习范文，从,内容、写作方法、立意等方面进行分析，了解范文的写作特点，再根据自己的兴趣、经历、素材的积累情况等有选择的进行模仿。模仿的样板不仅仅是局限于课本提供的范文，也可以是精心寻找的适合自己学习和模仿的文章或段落。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,（2）鼓励创新，了解“我也可以那样写”。很多人会担心仿写会禁锢自己的想象和创新。但只要运用得法，扬其利，避其弊，仿写就不会束缚自己的思维，一些消极作用完全可以避免。仿写从来不是意味着“我只能这样写”，而是“我可以这样写”，当然“我也可以那样写”。仿写只是习作起步阶段的第一个台阶，通过这一级台阶，可以,走向更高更远的目的地。在仿写时所产生的变化，其实就是一种创新。尤其是不拘于表达形式的创新更加要鼓励。因为能创新，说明有思想、有能力，只要是正确的价值观，那么“我想怎么样写就可以怎样写”。,3.消除畏难，培养意识 我们都听过家长这类的叮嘱：“开始学写作文了，你可要认真点！”“作文写不好，你的语文成绩永远上不去！”“写作文不是容易的事，一定要下功夫！”家长紧张，自己困惑，作文自然成了一只“虎”。新教材中增加了用学生语言抒写反映自己生活的范文，内容简单，篇幅短小，读了倍感亲切。同时对作文有了感性认识，才知道写作文并不,是难事。从而建立起写作的信心，感受到这样的作文“我也能写”。渐渐地，我们学会了可以用写作的方式去表达自己的思想和情感，当遇到情感的波动时便会产生“我想写下来”的冲动。这便是写作意识。当我们养成了写作的意识，才会经常用写作的方式来表达情感，从而“乐于写作”，并从写作中感受到快乐。仿写是培养写作意识的起点。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,总之，仿写是写作的起始，是培养写作意识的有效途径。只要我们学会仿写，迈好写作的第一步，然后由易及难，由浅入深，循序渐进，最终便能水到渠成。仿写起步，试着走上写作的道路，再充分发挥我们的创新精神，就能在一定程度上培养自己良好的写作能力，从而能写作文，想写作文，乐写作文！,后院那株爬山虎高婷婷 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