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雅思作文写作Task 第五课时Discuss类 太傻面授教师教案 IELTS大作文讲解：Discuss 类作文 学生 时间 面授老师 本次课时 IELTS写作第五课时 1.作文简介、写作技巧 教学思路 2.实例讲解 3.课后作业 1. Discuss类作文理论分析 教学目标 2. 掌握此类作文的基本特征和写作方法 3. 学习写作思路 写作理论分析 讲解重点 范文学习 常用句式总结 备考资料 教学详细内容： 一、 分析雅思写作Discuss类理论 1. 题目特点及解题思路 1） 题目特点： 剑桥真题、雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全 Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion. 2） 解题思路： 这种题型可参考以下两种写法： 太傻面授教师教案 A. 一边倒：作者明确表明赞同一方观点并进行论证支持 B. 两方面：作者对观点从两方面进行阐述 3) 文章结构包括： a: 开头段，背景阐述，引出论题 b: 分析阐述two points of view的一点，正或反 c: 分析阐述另一方观点 d: Your opinion, 2. 写作技巧讲解 1、比较选择类的题目重在比较二字。比较的本质自然是吧两个观点的支持论点放在一起看哪一个更有力。 2、讨论类的作文里可以找到相对立的两个方面。在下笔前，需要确定自己所倾向的观点是什么。对于雅思写作，不需要过多的追求新颖独特，言之有理即可。这意味着我们可以站在赢的一方去写： 比如，讨论online shopping好还是去shopping mall好的一个问题 有同学说：当然是传统的购物方式好，论据是在shopping mall里可以看到具体货品，质量更可靠。而提到online shopping的好处时：购买方便货品便宜、选择多样等。 既然这样，我们就要考虑一下，是不是站到shopping online更好 太傻面授教师教案 这一面去写更容易写呢？ 3. 常用句型及模板： 常用句型： 1） 对于这一观点，我表示支持 I subscribe to / am favor of an opinion that 2） 关于研究得最多的话题对造成了影响 The most studied issue that has been the impact of on 3） 4） 5） 大多数人普遍接受 It is widely accepted by most that 不用说 It goes without saying Needless to say, it is 然而，基本上能肯定的是 However, what is almost certain is that 6） 在最近几年里，的持续曝光已经引起新的讨论 In recent years, the ongoing disclosure of has ignited a new row on 7） 8） 与此相反的意见是 The counter-argument is that 在我看来，对的反对意见是基于不正确的事实和偏见的 It seems to me that the objection against is based on incorrect facts and stereotypes. 9） 两个观点都是部分正确 Both sides are partly right. 10) 细看一下这个说法，并不是那么有道理 This statement is less self-evident than it first appears. 太傻面授教师教案 模板： 开头段： _ now plays such an important role in so many people's lives that it is essential for us to try to decide whether it is a blessing or a curse. People's opinions are divergent on such a complex and controversial topic. Advocates maintain that _. Opponents, on the other hand, contend (argue/insist) that _. Obviously, both sides have over-simplified this issue. Actually, its value to people and society depends on how it is used. 正文段一： Those advocates who maintain that _ tend to present following reasons. 正文段二： However, opponents may examine this issue in another angle. For one thing, _.For another, _.Furthermore, _. 结尾段： In any case, whether the ultimate effect of _ is beneficial or detrimental, one thing is certain that _ in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to society. (Weighing the two sides, both arguments seem to be 太傻面授教师教案 reasonable, after all.) 二、 实例分析 题目: 剑桥真题7 Test 1 It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 1. 题目分析 Ø 题目意思：人们普遍认为，有些人天生就具有一定的天赋，例如在体育或音乐领域拥有他人所没有的才能。然而，有的人认为通过教育任何孩子都能成为一个优秀的运动员或音乐家。讨论上述两种观点并给出你自己的意见。 Ø 审题关键：首先，要确定本题涉及的领域是教育；其次，双方意 太傻面授教师教案 见的争论点是先天才能还是后天教育；最后，考生看到先天还是后天的时候不要想当然的因为是旧题，本题还是侧重在音乐或者体育领域。 Ø 从结构上来看：这篇文章的题型是Discuss，因此文章可以分为三个部分：首段引入话题，正文第一段讨论第一种说法，正文第二段讨论第二种说法，结尾段表达并总结自己的观点。 2. 范文分析 Therelative importance of natural talent and training is afrequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music. 首段背景介绍； relative importance, 相对重要性，是一种非常地道的表达方式； frequent比起popular，是一个更为学术的词汇； Obviously, education systemsare based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the viewthat a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice. 正文第一段主题句：雅思大作文写作的正文部分每段必须有主题句，即分论点； 太傻面授教师教案 Obviously用在段首，承上启下； Be based on, 词组的用法； 定语从句； 学到技能，用acquire； Including的用法； Associated with，词组，与相关的意思； Plenty of，用以替代many，a lot of等口语化的词或词组； 定语从句。 However, some people believe thatinnate talent iswhatdifferentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and thisextra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices. However表转折，连接上下文； Innate talent，固定搭配，与生俱来的天赋； 表语从句； Differentiate A from B, 把A和B区分开来； 进一步解释说明的表达方法, in other words； There be句型，雅思大作文要活用there be 句型； Extra talent，地道用法。 太傻面授教师教案 I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents cangive individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach acomparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are notmutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists andexceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent. inherit，常用词汇，注意积累； via，表示通过； 复合句结构； give sb a facility,给某人提供条件； comparable，可比较的，比得上的，注意词汇的积累； 相互排斥的 特别的 并列句结构 In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then 太傻面授教师教案 some natural talent is required. 3. 范文写作思路总结 作者的观点在原文中保持一致，第一，强调天赋的是先天的：I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes；第二，强调天赋和训练都重要But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive；最后得到自己的结论，所有的孩子都可以接受训练，但是成就往往还需要一点天赋：any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required。这三点既保证了一致性又层层递进，极有逻辑性。 *附录：范文翻译 当人们试图解释不同程度的在体育、艺术或音乐方面的能力时，天赋和培训两者的相对重要性是一个经常拿来讨论的话题。 显然，许多教育体制都基于这样一种信仰所有的孩子都能被有效地训练以获得不同的技巧，这里也包括那些和体育、艺术或音乐相关的技巧。因此，从我们读书的经历来看，我们能找到许多证据来证明这样一个观点-任何一个孩子都能从持续的教学和指导性的训练中得到这些技巧。 太傻面授教师教案 然而，一些人相信天生的才能就是能使那些通过训练才能进行体育活动或弹奏乐器的人和那些成为优秀运动员的人区分开来的东西。 换句话说，这里更重要的是能力而不是所学的技巧，并且这种特别的天赋是不能被传授的，不论教师有多么优秀或者孩子进行多么频繁的操练。 我个人认为有些人确实有着可能是从他们基因里遗传下来的天赋。这些天赋能帮助这些个体掌握一定技巧，使得他们领先于其他人；而那些更加努力的学生却无法达到可以相提并论的高度。但是，跟所有涉及天赋还是教育的其他问题一样，这两者并不是相互排斥的。优秀的音乐家或艺术家以及技艺超群的体育明星所取得的成功应不仅归功于好的训练，也同时是天赋的作用。没有天赋，长期训练将会既没吸引力也没什么成果，而没有训练，孩子是无法学习如何开发和发展他们得天赋的。 综上所述，我同意任何孩子都能被传授特定技巧的观点，但是要在音乐，艺术和体育等领域中出类拔萃，一些自然天赋不可或缺。 三、课后练习：剑桥真题7 Test 2 Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when 太傻面授教师教案 deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.