人教八年级下册UnitCouldyoupleasecleanyourroom写作课课件.pptx

Could you please clean your room?,Section B,Could you please clean your ro,预习检测,名词/动名词词块:, a waste of time class meeting as much time as possible,（ ）尽可能多的时间（ ）浪费时间（ ）班会,预习检测名词/动名词词块: a waste of tim,预习检测,动词词块:,have a discussion on share some housework pay more attention to studydepend ondevelop ones independencedevelop the sense of responsibilityreduce the pressure,（ ）依靠，依赖（ ）培养独立性（ ）就进行讨论（ ）减压（ ）分担家务（ ）更专注学习（ ）培养责任感,预习检测动词词块: have a discussion o,预习检测,介词词块:,in order to get good grades in my opinion in a wordby doing sth.,（ ）依我看来（ ）总之（ ）通过做某事（ ）为了取得好成绩,预习检测介词词块: in order to get goo,学习目标,To learn to express your opinion about the topicChores & Housework,To improve the writing skills by making sentences and coopertion.,To learn to share the housework with our parents and communicate with them.,学习目标Knowledge aimsAbility aims,Lead-in,Lead-in,问题引入,What kind of housework do you do at home?,Do you like or dislike doing chores at home?,问题引入What kind of housework do,课堂探究1：（以说促写）,Pros,Cons,课堂探究1：（以说促写）ProsCons,课堂探究1：（以说促写）,请注意：先陈述观点，再说明理由（10）,Debate,课堂探究1：（以说促写）请注意：先陈述观点，再说明理由（10,探究小结1,探究小结1,As for .,至于，关于,How to express your own opinions on something？,In my opinion/view,在我看来,As we know /As is known to all,正如我们所知,As a result/ In a word/In fact,因此，总之，事实上,Firstly / Secondly / Thirdly / Finally,第一，第二，第三，最后,On one hand.On the other hand,在一方面，在另一方面,I think / believe,我认为，我相信,探究小结1,As for .至于，关于How to express y,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）,【例句1】Playing computer games is a waste of time.,浪费时间,做家务是浪费时间。,【仿写】（汉译英）,a waste of,Doing housework,is,time,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）【例句1】 浪费时间做家务是浪,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）,【例句2】2.Tom helps me with my maths.,我喜欢帮妈妈做家务。,【仿写】（汉译英）,like helping my mother,with housework.,help sb. do / with sth. 帮助某人做某事,I,do the housework.,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）【例句2】我喜欢帮妈妈做家务。,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）,【例句3】Its very hard for him to study two languages.,对青少年来说，在家里做家务是有趣又有意义的。,【仿写】（汉译英）,to do housework,interesting and meaningful,for teenagers,at home,Its,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）【例句3】对青少年来说，在家里,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）,【例句4】They should spend their time on schoolwork in order to get good grades and get into a good university.,李明花了很多时间在篮球上就是为了能赢得篮球比赛。,【仿写】（汉译英）,win the basketball game.,spent much time on basketball,in order to,Li Ming,课堂探究2：（佳句欣赏与模仿）【例句4】李明花了很多时间在篮,探究小结2：,1.浪费时间2.帮助某人做某事3.对某人来说做某事怎么样4.花时间在某事上5.为了,a waste of time,help sb. do / with sth,Its + adj. for / of sb. to do sth,spend time on sth,in order to,探究小结2：1.浪费时间 a waste of timeh,课堂探究3,Doing housework is a part of our life.Do middle school students do housework? Recently a survey was made among 100 students.We can get some information from the survey.Only ten percent of the students often do housework. About twenty-five percent of the students do housework sometimes.And the rest of the students seldom or never do housework.This result takes me by surprise.,（普宁市2017-2018学年 八年级下学期期末素质监测真题）,Pre-writing,课堂探究3 Doing housework is a,According to the survey,forty percent of the students dislike doing housework,and eighteen of them say that their patents dont allow them to do housework.I think sharing the housework is helpful for parents. As for students,we can get a lot of practice by sharing the housework.And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up.So I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life.,According to the survey,fo,重要信息点考点表述简洁答案直接获取信息重组信息归纳命题原则,Information Card,100,65%,Infor,Surprised,A lot of practice,18,The feeling the writer has aft,话题感知,本单元的话题为“谈论学生是否应该做家务”, 在写相关作文时, 首先要提出自己的观点, 然后根据观点做进一步阐述。体裁多以议论文为主。,话题感知本单元的话题为“谈论学生是否应该做家务”, 在写相关,B.书面表达(15分）,While-writing,B.书面表达(15分） While-writing,人教八年级下册UnitCouldyoupleasecleanyourroom写作课课件,1.审题要清,体裁,议论文,人称,第一人称,时态,一般现在时,三审,1.审题要清体裁议论文人称第一人称时态一般现在时三审,2.列要点提纲,1,我的观点（反对/支持）,2,为什么我这么认为,3,在家做什么家务,写作要点,2.列要点提纲1我的观点2为什么3在家做写作要点,这是一篇关于是否应该做家务的议论文，根据题目提示可考虑采用下面的模板。,写作提纲,这是一篇关于是否应该做家务的议论文，做家务引出话题阐明原因列,3.扩点成句,I think its necessary for us to do some housework at home.,3.扩点成句1. 表明观点，我们是否应该做家务活；I thi,3.扩点成句,A.By doing it we can learn self-care.,B.We can make our bodies healthy and strong.,C.Doing housework can also help us learn a lot of things.,3.扩点成句1.做家务可以使我们学会自理；A.By doin,4.连句成段,连段成篇,4.连句成段,连段成篇A. I think its nec,使用连接词,.表示并列或递进: and, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor.表示结果: sothat, tooto .表示转折: but, however, although, though.表示因果: because, so, therefore, as a result.表示条件: if , unless.表示对比: on the one handon the other hand.表示解释: for example, such as.表示顺序: first, first (of all), to begin with; second, next, later, finally, in the end.表示目的: to, in order to, in order that.表示结论: all in all, in a word,使用连接词.表示并列或递进: and, bothand,4.连句成段,连段成篇,I think its necessary for us to do some housework at home. By doing it we can learn self-care. Besides, we can make our bodies healthy and strong. At the same time, doing housework can also help us learn a lot of things. And it can make us understand our parents better. I always help my parents with housework. For example，I often wash the dishes and clothes at home .It can make your parents feel relaxed, why not go to do that ?,4.连句成段,连段成篇 I think its,5.美化文章,5.美化文章. 活用各种句式,5.美化文章,I think its necessary for us to do some housework at home. By doing it we can learn self-care. Besides, we can make our bodies healthy and strong. At the same time, doing housework can also help us learn a lot of things. And it can make us understand our parents better. I always help my parents with housework. For example，I often wash the dishes and clothes at home .It can make your parents feel relaxed, why not go to do that ?,If we can,help them out with housework, they will feel much better.,Therefore, I strongly believe that middle school students should do some housework.,5.美化文章 I think its nece,定稿,I think its necessary for us to do some housework at home. By doing it we can learn self-care. Whats more, we can make our bodies healthy and strong. At the same time, doing housework can also help us learn a lot of things. Last but not least, if we can help them out with housework, they will feel much better I always help my parents with housework. For example，I often wash the dishes and clothes at home .It can make your parents feel relaxed.Therefore, I strongly believe that middle school students should do some housework.,定稿 I think its necessar,自信检测,1.青少年做家务的现状。2.你对青少年做家务的看法及理由。（可从以下几个方面来阐述：1. 做家务可以动手动脑，使人更聪明。2. 帮父母做家务可以使父母有更多的时间休息和放松。3. 通过做家务，可以学到基本的生活技能。）3.你平时在家是否也会帮忙做家务？做的是哪些家务？,现实生活中，很多青少年在家不做家务。请你也写一篇短文谈谈自己的观点。内容包括：,作文要求：1.不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右。,自信检测1.青少年做家务的现状。现实生活中，很多青少年在家不,How to write an argumentation（议论文）?,Outline,Beginning:,Main body:,Ending:,提出论点并陈述正反方观点,表明自己的观点,支持自己观点的理由,再次重申自己的观点,How to write an argumentation（,分组合作,Groupwork,Post-writing,分组合作Groupwork作文等级1315分1012分7,Thank you for your listening！Good-bye！,Thank you for your listening！G,1.本文为我们讲述了一位老人收养弃婴的感人故事。本课的教学旨在引导学生关注自己的生活实际，去真切地感悟这种人间真情，并让学生体会爱的伟大，从而也能奉献爱心。2.引导学生关注自己的生活实际，去真切地感悟这种人间真情，并让学生体会爱的伟大，从而也能奉献爱心。3.该组散文诗短小精巧，富含诗意哲理，把纷繁的事物经过高度浓缩，使之呈现出简洁美，给人以启迪，令人从中品味出诗意。4.诗人柯蓝没有用长者身份灌输自己的想法，而是以孩子的口吻，从孩子的视角去观察生活，认识生活，想象生活，感怀生活，拉近了沟通的距离，增强了亲切感。5.全篇笔锋自然流畅，语言亲切活泼，抒情色彩极为浓重，容易打动读者感染读者，读后能给人以启迪与思考。6.童年生活，是无忧无虑，天真烂漫的时光，对它的描摹更能激起学生的共鸣，相似年纪发生的事情也会更具说服力，更能使学生体会作者丰富的情感，能引导学生健康的成长。7.这篇文章诗意盎然的优美散文，文辞优美，字里行间透着灵气，迸发出勃发向上的追求与热情，展示了作者与众不同的个性。要在反复读中用心去体会。8.学习本文，不光要了解文章的内容，分析其结构；更重要的是要认识文学作品对青少年成长的意义，从而养成自觉主动地阅读优秀文学作品的习惯。培养热爱大自然、热爱生活、热爱祖国的思想感情,感谢观看，欢迎指导！,1.本文为我们讲述了一位老人收养弃婴的感人故事。本课的教学旨,