中考英语写作话题6健康与安全课件.ppt

目录,写作练兵,写作技巧6巧用比较等级,分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书面表达可知，与“健康与安全”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：如何保证自身安全，如2016宿迁；如何保持健康，如2015盐城。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：如何保护视力。,命题探索,教材链接,健康：七(上)Unit 6 Food and lifestyle安全：八(上)Unit 8 Natural disasters,(2016宿迁)为增强安全意识，学校英语俱乐部将开展“如何提升自我保护能力”的讨论。请以“How to protect ourselves”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容必须包括以下要点：,审标题：保护自己的方法审文体：说明文审人称：第一人称审时态：一般现在时,典例剖析,审要点：除了以上3点外，还需要自由发挥至少2点内容。如：处于困难中时，立即向警察求助；要有安全意识,1. 尊敬师长，与同学友好相处；2. 公共场所，举止文明，不追逐打闹； 3. 不乱交网友，不泄露个人信息；4. (自主发挥，至少两点)注意事项：1. 词数90左右，标题与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。,How to protect ourselves_Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!,1. We can shout to our parents and let them know about the danger.We can shout to our parents to let them know about the danger.2. Sixteenyearolds shouldnt be allowed to drive.I dont think sixteenyearolds should be allowed to drive.3. We should be careful when we make friends online.We are supposed to be careful when we make friends online.,如何保证自身安全,角度,1,升格范例,1. You should keep the bathroom floor dry, or you may fall down.(用动词不定式表目的升格) _2. We can ask the police for help when we are in danger at home alone.(用宾语从句升格) _,You should keep the bathroom floor dry to avoid falling down.,I think we can ask the police for help when we are in danger at home alone.,句 子 升 格,3. When we surf on the Internet, we shouldnt tell others about our personal information.(用be supposed to do sth升格) _ _,When we surf on the Internet, we arent supposed to tell others about our personal information.,4. The best way to relax is exercise.(扩写看法)The best way to relax is exercise. It is healthy for the mind and the body.5. Jane has many good habits.(扩写做法)Jane has many good habits. She always gets up early.,如何保持健康,角度,2,扩写范例,6. You need to take breaks away from the computer.(扩写原因)You need to take breaks away from the computer because you played computer games all weekend.7. Staying up to study is harmful to your health.(扩写原因)Staying up to study is harmful to your health. It will affect your study for lack of energy.,4. We can play sports with friends in our spare time.(扩写看法) _ _5. In order to live a healthy life, you need to keep a balanced diet.(扩写做法) _ _ _,We can play sports with friends in our spare time. I think sports can make us stronger and healthier.,In order to live on a healthy life, you need to keep a balanced diet. Remember to have meals regularly and eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food.,句 子 扩 写,6. We shouldnt eat food that has gone bad.(扩写原因) _ _7. You should have breakfast every morning no matter how busy you are.(扩写原因) _ _ _,We shouldnt eat food that has gone bad because it will do harm to our health.,You should have breakfast every morning no matter how busy you are. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning.,速记,8. Old habits die hard. 旧习难改。9. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。 七(上)Unit 6 P6810. He who has health has hope.留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。11. Health is the first wealth.健康是第一财富。12. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。13. Safety comes first.安全第一。,俗语谚语,练语段,As teenagers, we know it is important to keep safe on our way to school and home. Here, Id like to share my advice about keeping ourselves safe. Above all, _(建议1). Second, on our way to school or home, _(建议2). Whats more,its necessary to be careful when we make new friends/we should ask police for help immediately when in danger/.,语 段 练 习 1,如何保证自身安全,it is wise to go to school or return home together with classmates/we shouldnt walk alone/.,_(建议3). Then, _(建议4),wed better not stay outside for a long time/we should pay attention to the traffic lights/.,we are supposed to know some basic ways to keep ourselves safe/never tell your personal information to strangers/.,In order to keep healthy, I _(方法1). Every day I keep a balanced diet, and I _(方法2), which _(原因). In my spare time, I _(方,get up early and run for an hour every day/exercise for half an hour every morning/.,语 段 练 习 2,如何保持健康,eat many green vegetables and fruit/never eat junk food/.,is good for my health/does good to my health/.,take part in many activities/usually play sports/.,法3), such as _(举例). Whats more, I also _ _(方法4)because it_(原因),swimming, dancing and traveling with friends/playing basketball and soccer ball/.,like reading in my free time/enjoy listening to some music in my spare time/.,can make me peaceful and relaxed/can sweep my stress away/.,成篇章,How to protect ourselvesNo matter what we do, it is the most important to learn to protect ourselves. Well, how to protect ourselves for us students?Firstly, we should respect the teachers and elders, and at the same time, we need to get on well with our classmates. Secondly, behave well in public and dont run after each other. Thirdly, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. We,shouldnt give our exact personal information to them. Last but not least, its important for us to eat more healthy food and obey the traffic rules. Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!,(2020原创)健康是人生的首要财富。如果没有了健康，财富、地位一切也都失去了意义，所以在日常的生活中，我们一定要懂得如何保持健康，那么应该如何来保持健康呢？请你根据以下所给要点，以“How to keep healthy”为题，写一篇英语短文。,写作练兵,写作练兵,注意事项： 1. 词数90左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。,写作练兵,写作练兵,How to keep healthyAs far as we know, health is the first step to success._,写作练兵,写作练兵,Here are some ways to keep healthy. Firstly, we must eat healthy food. Breakfast is necessary. It gives energy to our body. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. Secondly, its necessary to do exercise. It makes us active and strong. Thirdly, never stay up late. If we cant get enough sleep, the whole body will work slowly. As,_,写作练兵,写作练兵,the saying goes, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” Fourthly, learning to reduce pressure is also important for our health. We can listen to music and talk to others when we feel stressed out. Lastly, we should have a positive attitude towards our life. Dont be upset for something bad. Just let it go. Follow the ways, and you will be healthy!,当对事物进行程度上的比较时，可采用形容词和副词的三个比较等级：同级比较、比较级和最高级。常用结构有：as.as结构，more.than结构，“the比较级，the比较级”结构，“比较级and比较级”结构和the most.结构。,1. 同级比较：English is as interesting as Chinese.2. 比较等级：The more exercise she does, the healthier she will be.Our city becomes more and more beautiful with the hard work of all people.3. 最高级：He is one of the best players in our school.,句式连接范例,1.在考试中，你越细心，犯的错误就越少。 _ _2.站得越高，看得越远。 _ 3.我已经习惯了这里的生活，而且和以前一样幸福地生活着。 _,The more carefully you do in the exam, the fewer mistakes you will make.,The higher you stand, the farther you see.,I have got used to the life here, and I live as happily as before.,4.我坚信中国会越来越强大。 _5.这是我读过最有意义的一本书。 _ 6.她关心她的学生胜过自己的孩子。 _,We believe that China will be stronger and stronger.,This is the most meaningful book I have ever read.,She takes care of her students more than her own child/children.,